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Jun 30 2010 06:53 PM ET

'The Twilight Saga': We talk to screenwriter Melissa Rosenberg

Melissa Rosenberg has been Stephenie Meyer’s big-screen translator since the first Twilight movie debuted back in 2008. With a new director coming on to each film, Rosenberg’s constant presence has helped ensure Meyer’s story stays constant throughout the saga. Also, in Eclipse, since director David Slade isn’t a writer, all the words spoken by your favorite characters came straight from Rosenberg’s computer. We checked in with the screenwriter, who recently left her day job as showrunner of Showtime’s hit series Dexter to direct her attention completely to the Twilight series. The California native took a break from pre-production on Breaking Dawn to chat with us.

ENTERTAINMENT WEEKLY: How did writing Eclipse compare to the last two books?
MELISSA ROSENBERG:
For me, Eclipse was my favorite book of the first three, for sure. The triangle comes to a head and that creates some really tense conflict, which is always good when you’re trying to write scenes. This is the third act of the story because Breaking Dawn goes off into completely new territory. That, and the huge battle we build to throughout the movie, was compelling. What was funny was Eclipse ended up being the hardest to write. That big battle happens in the third act, so it was all about pulling some of the conflict and danger forward to lace throughout the story. It became quite the challenge. But in the end, it was quite fun because I got to fill out some of the mythology, such as the character of Riley, the newborn army, Victoria, and everything that was going on that you can’t do in the book because it’s from Bella’s point-of-view.

Was there conferencing with Stephenie for those scenes?
Oh yeah.

Do you write and then show her, or do you talk to Stephenie ahead of time?
A little of both, actually. One of the things she did that helped me with enormously was she let me read The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner in advance, and that was really useful in terms of what was going on outside [Bella's world], so I was able to imagine it. I would come up with stuff and bounce it off of her and she gave me the short story and I pulled a few ideas from that.

How did you keep the momentum going throughout the story since the battle is at at the end?
It was about threading all the danger and the threat through the beginning and the middle of the story. It was a real challenge. It was also a challenge because Bella is our way into the movie. Bella is our point of view. Because of the two guys fighting over her in the story, she’s so reactive. Which is fine for a book. It works beautifully. For a movie, you can’t have your lead just standing there reacting. It was a lot about how to keep her active in the middle of this tug-of-war.

How did you make her more active?
Small things. In the book, Jacob shows up at her workplace and talks her into getting on the back of the motorcycle. He sort of steals her away. In the movie, it’s really Bella that decides to do this, and she initiates that in front of the school. It’s a small change. But these moments add up. In the book, there are some scenes of her being affectionately kidnapped by Alice. That was pulled out to keep her strong and keep her active.

Have you experienced celebrity from being a part of the franchise?
People don’t recognize me in the street, so it doesn’t really change my life. But people know my name, and it helps me get great restaurant reservations in New York. That completely surprised me. When I most feel it is when I go to an event of some sort, and it’s lovely. Screenwriters are so rarely acknowledged for what they do. Most people don’t understand what we do. So it’s just great, and always surprising.

How was working with [Eclipse director] David Slade?
In all honesty, it was terrific. Now, I’m working with [Breaking Dawn director] Bill Condon on the next one. I think someone just chooses well. I had a really great collaboration with all four directors.

What was this collaboration like?
There was more of a collaboration because David is not a writer, so he kept me more involved throughout the production. Basically with Chris [Weitz] on New Moon, I handed him the draft and moved off to Eclipse. He’s a terrific writer so he was handling production rewrites. Same for Catherine [Hardwicke]. But with this one, I was much more involved, for better or worse. Pretty much every word up there is mine. I shouldn’t say that, they’ll know who to blame it on. [Slade] is very, very respectful of the script and kept everyone on the page. He planned in great detail ahead of time. He wants it all on the page locked before he starts shooting, so he can really design some great shots and great sequences. My favorite part was he did a lot of storyboarding in advance. I’d have a script, it’d have an action sequence. He would then take that sequence and storyboard how he wants to see it. He would then walk me through the storyboards, and I’d put it back into the screenplay the way he wants to do it. So, it’d be on the page and it would be this back and forth. He’d be sorta acting it out. He’s a very animated guy! He thinks in visual terms. So, it was a lot of fun.

Do you have a favorite moment of the film?
I have a couple of them but one is a small moment. It’s one of my favorites: When Bella tells Charlie, her dad, that she’s a virgin. I just love that! Their chemistry together is fantastic. That Billy Burke is so funny!

Do you find it challenging to deal with the religious overtones in the books?
What’s always kind of amazed me is that Stephenie and I probably are polar opposites in terms of our political and spiritual beliefs. I’m raised in a hot tub from Marin County, [Calif.]. I couldn’t be further left. She’s a very religious Mormon. In truth, we’ve never talked politics. We’ve never talked religion. We just haven’t. It hasn’t come up. The only thing that comes up is that I swear like a truck driver and she doesn’t. And I drink and she doesn’t drink. But she doesn’t ever judge me for either of those things. It’s important for me that I not violate my own beliefs and I won’t write something that does. It was interesting that within all of these movies, certainly within Breaking Dawn, you can peel away some of the stuff that is more to the right and some of the anti-choice stuff and there is a core, real human experience. You don’t have to go there. You can tell the story without doing that. That was important to me, but I had to respect her beliefs as well. I can’t violate her beliefs. It’s kinda where the blue and the red come together. At the core of it, it’s about a woman choosing to have a child. That is as pro-choice as you get. That doesn’t violate anything that Stephenie believes in, and that doesn’t violate the story. It’s about finding the common ground. What’s really important: These are Twilight movies. This is entertainment. It is not the forum to be making political commentary. It’s just not. Nobody wants to turn this into a referendum on abortion. It’s inappropriate.

Do you think the scene with Edward refusing Bella enforces the conservative views?
Yeah, but you have the other side of that. The other part of that conversation is Bella asking, “What are you, a dinosaur?” She has her own values that are every bit as legitimate. She doesn’t admit he is right, and she isn’t ashamed to have asked him to do that. It comes down to you can be who you are. There’s nothing wrong with someone believing that. It’s only when you start forcing other people to believe the same thing. It’s about a girl who is embracing and embodying her own sexuality. She’s unapologetic about that. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with a portrayal of a young girl who has sexual desire. I think that’s something we avoid a lot – this concept that girls are actually desirous. So I’m pleased to have this character who’s um…you know…randy! There’s nothing wrong with it. It’s a very healthy place to be.

How has your relationship with Stephenie evolved over the years?
It’s been great. When I started out, I was nervous. She’s the author of these books. I was really worried she was going to subsume my process. So I kept her at bay for the first half of the first one. In the middle of writing it, I met her and went, oh, wow, my fears are completely unfounded. She is someone who is really collaborative and not precious about the work. If there’s a better idea out there — if I saw a scene different then she saw it, she’s really open to it. Which is…shocking. Once I got that about her, I began to use her as a resource a great deal more. Since then, that’s only deepened and expanded. She’s been a great collaborator, I’d have to say one of my favorite collaborations, ever. She’s one of my main sources. Whenever I’m stuck on something, I’ll call or email her for ideas.

Were you hoping there would be two Breaking Dawn movies?
Initially, I went back and forth. At first, I thought one. Then, when I got more into the story and thought, you know what, this is two. It’s a lot in one book. We would have had to cut out so much to do one movie. The nature of the book is sort of two movies. There’s before she’s a vampire and then after she’s a vampire. We’d be giving short shrift to both sections to try and do it as one.

How will it feel to leave the Twilight franchise?
I left Dexter after the fourth season, too. Twilight and Dexter — they’ve been my worlds for the last four years or so. Part of me is very excited about doing something new. I’m ready to branch out and explore other worlds and characters. The other part of me is sad to leave them and a little bit nervous. I’m comfortable in these worlds. I know I can write Dexter and Twilight. It’s always anxiety-provoking to go into new worlds and have to get to know a whole new language.

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  • JC

    I Only Love this Woman for her work on “Dexter”

    • PC

      OMG, I cant believe she wrote on DEXTER and now does TWILIGHT! AMAZING writing to the lamest movie ever!

    • PC

      how can u go from DEXTER to twilight! I just dont get it! Obviously the money, but still!

  • Marie

    these weren’t the right questions to ask her. MR should have a lot of explaining to do.
    i am a Twilight fan, but in all honesty, the scriptwriting for these movies have been very poor. that’s where a lot of the dislike for the movies as a whole comes from.
    maybe you should have asked her if she knew that she was mainly responsible for making these movies so weak when it comes to the script and why.

    • Wes

      Thats where youre wrong …. Twilight sux in general

      • erica

        wes, why are you even on this page then?

    • Tammy

      I agree, her screen writinf is bad. If you are going to combine scenes at least get the small details right for what is happening. The least she could have done was actual use the right dialogue from the books. I mean there isn’t much she needed to actual write, the dialogue is right there in the book. All she had to do was take the written lines from the book and write in the screen play. My one problem with Eclipse is the details small details she changed so that scene wasn’t anything like it was supose to be and the dialogue from the Bedroom scene. That she was all ready written for her and she barely used any of the dialogue. I so wish she was not writinf Breaking Dawn.

  • shellibelli

    the ist two movies were not written all that greatly, but, i kind of blamed the studios for the 1st one, they obviously didnt believe in it, and didnt put enough money into it.

    the second one was two much drama in the book and it carried to the movie.

    Eclipse was awesome! written very well, and not so much drama. very well done. I was very happy with it.

    Love Dexter will be sad to see her not writing there anymore

    • Angie

      Oh come on!! M.R. completely screwed up Eclipse. Through-and-through! I went into the theater glowing with anticipation and ended up leaving the theater utterly disappointed from all of the changes MR made… and that says a lot because I LOVE THE SERIES! Big BIG fan. But without a doubt, scenes were out of sequence and endless times the direction DID NOT fit what the characters did in the books. ***SPOILER ALERT*** When Jacob gets pissed because he overhears Bella and Edward talking on the mountain about getting married (before the newborn fight), in the movie Edward grabs Bella’s arm to STOP her from running to comfort Jacob… but in the book EDWARD is the one who brings Jake back. MR made Edward look like a jerk, like a little pansy. Also, Jacob NEVER comes to Bella’s workplace MR. I see you HAVEN’T read the books. Why are you lying to us? Your interview was a sham, a total farce! You couldn’t have consulted with Stephanie for all the stuff you say you did. So you read The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner. That does not translate to you consulting with Stephanie. It’s too bad that Stephanie is “not precious of the books” like you say because in my opinion – you’ve damaged the characters. In the books Bella NEVER gets on Jacob’s motorcycle at the school – she would never do that to Edward. It is only after Alice kidnaps her that she decides to make a break for it while Edward is hunting. That’s how she asserts herself. That’s her action. The way you wrote the movie makes NO SENSE!! Why does Summit even employ you? Seriously. Alice kidnapping Bella doesn’t make her look weak and idle. The kidnapping fits the logical sequence of events. Bella would never ride off with Jacob and disrespect Edward like that until she is provoked. And yes, Edward was jealous, but he realizes that having Alive kidnap Bella was driving “a wedge” between the two of them. In the book, Edward is the mature, intelligent adult and gives Bella control – gives her the reigns because he loves her and as a plus… he gives her a sexy biker jacket so she can ride motorcycles with Jacob safely. Thank you for destroying my favorite novel MR. I’m so disappointed. Good news: all of the actors did a GREAT job in this movie and Edward’s makeup has never looked better. **SPOILER ALERT** The scenes with the third wife = LAME LAME LAME. Bella punching Jacob = LAME LAME LAME. (P.S. In the book, Bella tells Edward to break his jaw for kissing her. Not once did Bella say, “Edward, don’t do this here”). Thanks for getting that wrong too MR. Summit, you have made a fortune! Why aren’t you creating EPIC films with the profit? Good job to all the actors. Loved Rob, Kristen and Taylor. Billy, Peter, and the entire crew. You can tell their acting skills are evolving. ***SPOILER ALERT*** Rosalie’s story was well done. Nikki was outstanding, but they could’ve made Jasper’s backstory stronger. Still, Jackson did excellent with the poor script he was given. Summary: the actors were phenomenal, but otherwise Eclipse was a major disappointment. Like others on this board I’m also in my mid-twenties, I’m college educated, and I’m a married mother of one.

      • Courtney

        Eclipse is my favorite book by far, mostly for the backstories — which were handled quite well by MR. I, too, agree that she’s kind of screwed up the characters as Stephenie Meyer intended them to be, especially in Twilight and New Moon. I’ve always been firm in my judgment that MR has been the weak link and the studio should have replaced her after Twilight like they did with Catherine Hardwicke. However, this interview was insightful into MR’s process of writing the screenplay. I also find that she seems to be trying to correct herself and backtrack, at least with Bella. She’s taken all of the life and spark out of Bella and made her all doom and gloom, although Kristen Stewart’s acting doesn’t help too much. The only thing that bothered me about the novel is that Edward acted like an over-protective father reluctantly agreeing to let his child go on playdates; meanwhile, she’s practically forced to make an escape. So, that’s why I’m finally warming up to MR because she wants to give Bella the assertive voice that she deserves, even if it deviates from the book a little bit. The movies as a solid trilogy have now evened out; MR has managed to redeem Bella, in my opinion. Not trying to disagree with you wholeheartedly. I just wanted to put my own view out there as a reasonable fan of both the books and the movies. Hey, I guess I’m Switzerland too. :]

      • Jazz

        I want to cry at the terrible job Melissa did. OMG, I want my characters back the way I fell in love with them. I went to the movie last night, just like you and I can’t tell you I just wanted to cry – not because of the passion of these characters but the lack of. OMG, It’s my fault though, Eclipse was my favorite book. the emotional ride that book takes you on was why I couldn’t wait to see this movie but, all of the beautiful scenes from the books were gone. So sad.

      • sharon

        Agreed….Thank you Angie, I agree with every thing you say, thank you for putting it so nicely in to words for me…….

  • Jose

    If the Twilight movies were written as great as she writes “Dexter”, then people would not make fun of it.

  • Jane

    The script can only be as good as the source itself. I’d put 98% of the blame on Meyer, and 2% intense heat on Rosenberg. Rosenberg is talented–as seen on Dexter–but Meyer is elementary school at best.

    • Sarah

      She is a talented screenwriter, and I think she did a fabulous job with the material she had to work with. I will be VERY curious to see how she grapples with the disaster that is ‘Breaking Dawn.’ Translating that mess to the big screen will be the challenge of a lifetime.

  • Enough!

    So, I am by no means a “twihard”, but I have had it up to my eyeballs with these Twilight articles becoming a Twilight bashing session in the comments section. If you don’t like Twilight, why are you reading an article about Twilight? I am not a fan of 24. I wouldn’t spend my time reading a piece on 24 and then bashing all the people that DO like 24. It’s almost comical how nasty the anti-twilight movement can get. And before anyone starts in on how I am just a pre-teen that has horrible taste… I am college educated, I am married, I have read all of Shakespeare, I own a house, and I don’t shop @ Forever 21.

    • Agree-er

      Thank you. I 100% agree.

    • Rica

      Sing out sister!

    • Michelle

      Because people have nothing better to do with their sad, pathetic lives than to find something or someone to rank on to make themselves feel better. I am sick of it too…not just with Twilight, but with everything.

    • melissa

      Amen! I agree entirely!

    • Carmen

      Thank you Enough, could not have said it better myself!!

  • AlysabethInAustin

    wow….screenwriter doesn’t know the book that well! jacob never comes to her work…he comes to school. she does once leave work and make a break for la push….call me if you need help on breaking dawn,melissa. i’m no longer wondering where it all went wrong with the first 2 movies. i see now.

    • Michelle

      Not to mention in the book, she was still mad at him when he showed up at school…and she DIDN’T LEAVE WITH HIM. She would NEVER leave Edward standing there to go off with Jacob.

      • Ummm, chilax

        The scene in the movie is a combination of Edward/Jacob’s confrontation (which was almost verbatim on screen) and Bella’s “prison break” from Alice’s slumber party. There was a point in the story when Bella hopped on the back of Jacob’s bike, but because a film can’t be 6 hrs long, it occurred much earlier, chronologically, than it happens in the novel. Jeeeeeeeze! And Twihards wonder why people mock the fandom…

      • sarah

        Totally agree with you (Ummm, Chilax) – all movie adaptations have changes in order for the movie to flow – 10 pages from a book can be summed up in a single scene. Fans need to remember that an author must put as much detail in description etc as possible, whereas a movie can show so much in the setting etc. Most movie adaptations have huge chunks of the novel missing or combined. Even Lord of the Rings has massive gaps and each of those installments are 3 hrs long! I think fans will never be happy with actors/acting/screenwriting!!

      • Brittany

        Umm…chilax and ENOUGH!

        I agree 100%. I hate feeling dumb for liking Twilight now. People have made it into such a big deal, or they’re bashing it. Its Harry Potter all over again. I am married and a college student and I love the literature.

        The movies are just a thing on the side, I see them because i’m interested in the visual aspects of them Not because I put more weight on the movies than the books. The book are good, end of story. :)

  • AlysabethInAustin

    and, i loved the books and well, saw the movies many times…not a hater…

  • WTF

    Wow. Adapting those books. Kinda like adapting Good Night Moon.

  • dee123

    She should of been asked how big was the pile of money they gave you to write that garbage was!

  • Michelle

    I have a few questions for MR…*SPOILER ALERT*…Why did you take out the whole “kidnapping” part? Why did you leave out the best line in the book?? When Edward leaves the note for Bella saying “Look after my heart, I’ve left it with you”? Makes me melt whenever I read that part of the book. I tried very hard to keep an open mind when I saw the movie, but those missing pieces…that was too much.

    • The Ween

      Ugh! That line just makes me squirm with its cheesy-ness. It’s that kind of writing that makes me understand people’s objections to the whole series. Other than those moments of smarm, though, I am in love with the story.

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  • anti

    MR , past peformance doesn’t gurantee future performance. In this case its you, people are saying you did well with dexter, but you suck big time with twilight. At least Catherince understand. thats why Twilight will be the most praised by critics. And Kristen never become Bella from the start, Bella becomes Kristen, thats always the problem.

  • TVDIVA

    I discovered the Twilight books AFTER I saw the first movie. Some things do not translate well from book to screen. Characters are combined, events are done out of sequence for more tension and drama – and even done by other characters. Harry Potter books are also huge and did not get completely translated to the screen because like someone said, to do so would mean six hour movies. Just be grateful we have the books AND the films. And please, if you do not light Twilight do not waste your money or time reading the books, seeing the movies or bashing Twilight on every web site. Spend your time on the books, shows and movies you love.

    • LIVEITUP

      I completely agree with what you said. I saw Eclipse last night and loved it! My hubby even enjoyed it saying it was the best yet. I did miss a few things from the book. SPOILER>The “top 10 best moments” conversation from the book is one of my favorite parts and that got condensed. Also, Bella being there when Jacob saved Leah from the newborn was a little weird for me. <SPOILER But, I understand that things have to be changed and shortened. Otherwise we would have 4 hour movies (which would have been okay for me too) but that's just the way it has to be. P.S…I thought Nikki Reed nailed Rosalie in Eclipse. I wish we could see more of her! I also enjoyed Billy Burke. He is hilarious!

      • Sarah

        I agree with your comments on Nikki Reed. They finally got her look right. I was hoping they’d spend a little more time with her backstory, but I imagine she’ll get more screen time in Breaking Dawn in her ‘protective’ role…

  • mk

    well I guess we know now why Eclipse could have been SO much better.

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